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Seeing everything I've never seen,
Breaking glasses like a dream,
Simply innocent,
Sincerly was meant,
To be lost in the rain,
Causing so much damn pain,

Letting me go,
It's the hardest thing you'll ever have to do,
See myself die,
You know that it was coming soon,
Fear of failing,
Time reminding,
Can't change it now,

Broken down and unfixable,
Lost all emotion left inside,
Bleeding through old wounds,
Bandages broken from dull blades,
Whisper nothing to you,
Have you heard it all before,

If I had it my way,
You'd be gone,
I'm undone,
No shelter with your arms around me,

Letting me go,
It's the hardest thing you'll ever have to do,
See myself die,
You knew that it was coming soon,
Fear of failing,
Time reminding,
Can't change it now.
©2005-2009 ~TheVoicesStare27
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wrote this yesterday, just another random moment were only song and poem writing helps me stay around. enjoy
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thats really very good. it reflects your feelings well and i like that
thank you, gld you like it. :)
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'broken inside'
o.o Wow, it's so emotional. :hug:
You thinking of making this one into a song too? You should.

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i think i am, cause it would be a good song
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'broken inside'
wow i really like this one. its very expressionate and everything lins together perfectly, each bit flowing into the next :XD: v gud :clap:

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thank you, glad you like it :)
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'broken inside'
welcome! (and thanu for the fav :XD: )

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your welcome, i really liked it, so i had to put it in there. :)
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'broken inside'

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